2nd rough draft for same sex essay

I attached the requirements in a doc for this second rough draft. The only feedback the professor gave was “you’ve got good general ideas, but I’m looking for depth add specifics in your papers. Please make sure to get some research to support your ideas next week as well as explain yourself in more depth.”
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